Have a clearly articulated thesis statement in your opening paragraph
Not have unnecessary or extensive summarization of the film
Include 3 clear examples/scenes that support your thesis
Include vocabulary from the textbook throughout
Demonstrate critical analysis/thinking/interpretation of the film
Incorporate feedback based on your draft
Feedback: this can be stronger if you tell us what your thesis statement is much sooner (perhaps go straight to the second paragrah and open with that?) Then you should cite three scenes from the film in as much detail as you can. Break down the scenes shot by shot and include vocab you learned from the textbook. Try to connect what you see in the film (in the shots) to the theme you are writing about.
Sample Solution
