Student 1 Hannah:
• Her Topic was about return system
– identifying key factors to improve in return system
• The overview was good she defined Reverse logistics well.
• About her Theory it would be better if she adds about who developed those theory. Some of the points on her optimal control theory was not clear I would recommend if she explained more about it and it would be better if she just focus on just one theory which is about decision theory. On the theory slide is wordy I it would be better if she just wrote the key points about instead of long sentences.
• Logic model: she explained her logic model well. It would be clearer if she explains how she is going to measure her dependent variable which was return on investment and defined her dependent variable.
Student 2 Corey
• His topic was about text versus voice communication and error rate difference
• He talked about two theory the first theory Activity theory is most effective and helpful during this research. The other thing he talked about is Phycology something like that its wasn’t clear and I didn’t understand what he meant it would be better if he explains about that more.
• He didn’t talk about limitation and conclusion
• It would be better if he did eye contact
• Also, it would be better if he add images to his slide to make it more interesting
• He needed to practice about time more because there was two-minute left for him its better if he used that two minutes talking about limitation about his project.
• Good discussion at the end.
Student 3 Codey
• his topic was about Airport operational cost
• His presentation was perfect he provided images and he talk about every important section.
• On His logic model his dependent variable should be cost instead of airport operating. And he should define his independent variable about operation and also, he should explain more about his other independent variable which is dishonest because it wasn’t clear for me.
