Revise the following to make the tone conversational yet professional.
1. By the way, Madison went ballistic when the manager accused her of ripping off office supplies.
2. As per your recent request, the undersigned is happy to inform you that we are sending you forthwith the procedure manuals you requested.
3. Kindly be informed that it is necessary for you to designate the model number of the appliance before we can submit your order.
4. Pursuant to your e-mail of the 4th, please be advised that your shipment was sent March 6.
5. R head honcho wz like totally raggety kuz I wz sick n stuff n mist the team meet. Geez!
6. The undersigned respectfully reminds affected individuals that employees desirous of changing their health plans must do so before December 30.

 

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