Uses of Feedback in Paragraphing

Examine the feedback I gave you on your Week 2 Writing HW 2 paper. • Do your errors tend to fall into certain groups? What groups? Are they errors you’ve made before? • How do you plan to use this feedback to improve your first two paragraphs? How do you plan to use the feedback when you write paragraphs 3-5? Give specific examples from your story. Length: 100 words; two paragraphs; post word count.

Respond to a classmates post; choose a classmate that no one has responded to yet, if possible. • Does your classmate have the same kind of errors? • Give your classmate advice on how to improve those errors. You can direct them to pages/chapters from our textbooks. Length: 80 words; two paragraphs; post word count.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sample Solution

ACED ESSAYS