ON the thesis – you want to be more specific with respect to the particular form of Christianity you are discussing in the paper (ie. Catholicism? Protestants? Evangelicals?). your argument should explain WHY Christians view the role of women in a certain way (ie. is it justified through their understanding of Biblical text?).
Your bibliography contains good sources but they touch on a wide variety of issues (ie. fertility, violence, churches in Africa) so I’m not clear on how you will use them all for this paper. You also have no annotations that tell me how each source will contribute.
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