Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the “you” view.
1. To make the employee reimbursement process quicker, we have automated the way in which you fill out the mobile worker trip forms. Please download and use the SmartTrip mobile app forms to receive your payment in less time.
2. To prevent increasingly costly payouts we have suffered from cyberfraud. We are issuing new chip-enabled credit cards to replace expired or lost to all of our customers.
3. Our rigorous safety policy forbids us from renting power equipment to anyone who cannot demonstrate proficiency in its use.
4. We’re requesting that all employees complete the attached online survey by April 1 so that we may develop a master schedule for summer vacations more efficiently.
5. To save the expense of having team trainers set up your training classes in our limited office space, we suggest offering a customized class for your employees right in your own building.
6. Our social media engineers are excited to announce a new free app called Fan Boosters that we believe will get fans to share, like, and subscribe to your content.
7. We take pride in our national policy of selling name brands at discount prices. That’s why we can allow store credit, but we cannot give cash refunds on returned merchandise.

 

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