Revising a business message

One post (answering the initial forum question) AND a minimum of two replies – an extremely good one paragraph post (this would be a minimum of eight full lines) and two replies that enhances the discussion and demonstrate mastery of the content. Replies should be just your opinion, wether you agree or not, no more than 5 sentences long.

Initial forum:
What are the three main tasks involved in revising a business message? Can you think of a business message that did not incorporate these tasks in their message?

Initial forum:
The latest issue of a local business newspaper names 10 area executives who have exhibited excellent leadership skills in the past year. You are currently searching for a job, and a friend suggests that you write each executive a congratulatory letter and mention in passing that you are looking for new career opportunities and would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. Is this a smart strategy? Why or why not?

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