The CIOB needs to be proofread and the wording made more clear. Then any of the sections with one sample need to be made to two samples so if the text is long we need to compress it so it’s a large paragraph with in-depth information and not text that has no punch. The professor is already 90% okay with what I’ve done.
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The CIOB just needs a cleanup and maybe restructuring so it looks more professional
The chartered engineer application should be more straight forward and you can use the word document I sent for extracting data for what I do at work.
- CIOB APPLICATION FORM
Keep it personal, i.e. talk about your own achievements, not what the team did.
Use terms such as “I led, designed, built, tested, negotiated, presented, implemented, achieved…….”
Avoid the use of jargon and unnecessary or unexplained abbreviations.
Use language that can be understood by someone who is not a specialist in your field. o Use words like “I designed the XYZ system” rather than “the XYZ system was designed” so that you are clearly stating who did what and emphasizing your own individual role.
Extract 1
Can you just confirm that all examples are within the required three years? Section 3.1.5 Khatib & Alami, not sure what year this related to?
Extract 2
I worked for Khatib & Alami up until July 2015 would you like me to revise and please confirm if we are now both on the same page so I can revise these sections.
Extract 3
Yes if you could revise, anything over three years would be dismissed unfortunately.
- CE application form
Sample Solution
