4. Version cut to half its length doubled
[paste this version here]
2. From-Scratch Revision
Rewrite your story from the start using entirely new words. You can retell the story in less space, or more space, hitting the same sequence of events or
varying the events and even the narrative arc. It’s likely you’ll allot more space to some beats and less space to others. Please be sure the narrative arc is
complete, even if it’s different from the one in the original piece.
Please post in the following format:
1. Original
[paste original here]
2. From-scratch revision
