A few months ago, Onward & Upward Outfitters began selling lightweight rain gear featuring a new thin, waterproof, breathable layer of fabric called H2O Pro-TechT. A few customers have complained that the rain gear seems to leak. “I really don’t think the fabric is defective. It’s just that our customers are not being properly educated about what they can expect from H2O Pro-TechT or how to care for the fabric,” Axel explains. He has addressed the situation by drafting a memo to store personnel (Document 3.2) stating the store’s policy regarding H2O Pro-TechT apparel. Read Axel’s draft, Document 3.2, (which can be found in this folder) and write a post in which you evaluate the effectiveness of Axel’s draft. Be specific in your response. For example, if you want to comment on the tone of a particular sentence or phrase, be sure to quote that sentence or phrase in your response. Includes standard elements for a memo (to, from, subject, and date). Subject line is specific. If necessary, second and subsequent pages include the recipient’s name, the date of the memo, and the page number. Includes a clear statement of purpose and a concise summary that conveys the main points and provides an advance organizer. Uses content and a writing style appropriate for the intended audience. Revised memo retains the major points found in the original memo. Looks professional in appearance, with informative headings and other effective design elements. Contains no typos or errors in spelling, punctuation, or grammar. DO NOT ADD A SOURCE
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