It’s an Economic Essay, in which I can apply economic concepts to my own life / families / experiences. I tried to continue my body paragraph(where I stopped writing” and have a clear conclusion, but I felt like my writing’s going off-topic;
I would like you to catch my point(to apply ‘Demand and Supply’ and ‘Cost and Quantities’ concepts to my family business which is a textile/fabric manufacturer in Korea) and
- Edit or Restructure(if needed) with correction in grammatical+etc errors
- Continue my body paragraph naturally by adding either information or examples in an economic perspective
- Conclude it by re-mentioning the ‘Communication techniques’ mentioned in 1st and 2nd paragraph, and comparing them with ‘Economic concepts’ in business field(Running a company)
Apologies for my unorganized direction and lack of time, as well.
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