Is Troy From Fences worthy of sympathy

My Essay is about if Troy and if he deserves sympathy. I only need certain add ons. This is what I have so far : https://docs.google.com/document/d/10xWgo5B0bfOVWLfDHmyjh75mhEiV4HswOUjscxVX56A/edit. All I need is for this is 400 more words. I need a second paragraph and a conclusion. I want the second paragraph to be 250-300 words and the conclusion be around 100-140 words. I already did my first reason and I just need you to do the second reason. This is the rubric. https://docs.google.com/document/d/1IcjEy-x25g2N2jqxomX9FpD1scDPTTX-DxRlzVJl_zs/edit, thank you.