“Relation of Shen, emotions(5 element emotions like :joy,anger, anxiety, overthinking, sadness),
guilt,depression should be described very well in TCM way with all the evidence based articles together AND the article(s) evidence based article about how acupuncture influences the SEROTONINE.
after that an explanation why in Modern(Western) Medicine SSRI’s is probably working as an antidepression because the function of SSRI is for increasing the serotonine level..

-pathology can be very strongly explained .. all the EXCES and DEFICIENCY patterns with little explanations.
For example how Lin Syndrome, Prostatitis and hypertiroide, SHEN, emotions CAN affect Premature Ejaculation.( what COULD BE the PATTERN, DIFFERENTIATION and MECHANISM behind it that causes PREMATURE EJACULATION)

So there are psychological symptoms that causes PE( shen, emotions, depression, anxiety, guilt etc)

and there are psychical symptoms that can causes PE( hypertyroide, prostatitis, Lin Syndrome etc)An desription of these 2 symptoms should be perfeft with the references ofcourse to books, etc..

  • i suppose you are also doing the ‘ abstract, introduction, discussion and conclusion’?

You can also use references of writers of books, doctors etc.. like Maciocia, Peter Deadman, Western doctors, scientific researches etc. The doctor who is good with Premature Ejaculation in Western Medicine is prof. Waldinger. Maybe u can use his references .
There is guidline called “Guidline diagnose in Dutch, Richtlijnen Premature Ejaculatie” this is very special reference for section 1.1 1.2 1.3 and 1.4 ..You should to Google Translate it because it is in Dutch..
I attached some work of him and researches and especially the definition,etiology and treatment etc..U can also use your own references as well..

  1. Etiology of Prematue Ejaculation according TCM
    2.1 emotions :definition of SHEN and the emotions According and the relation of shen/emotion to Premature ejaculation(anger , guilt, depression)(diet, profession, excessive sex, and EXPLENATARY MODEL of Premature Ejaculation according to TCM)
    2.2 Involved Zang Fu organs (related to Premature Ejaculation)
    2.3Involved substantions (The 5 vital substanstions Qi, Xue ,Jin Ye, jing and Shen.. (short explanation how involved etc..)
  2. Pathology…General explanation
    3.1 Pattern differentiations(for example Premature Ejaculation like: Kidney Jing, Kidney Yang def, Kidney Yin Definciency etc ETC ETC..), treatment principles and the acupuncture points. There are too much symptoms of Premature ejaculation just like 3.2 and 3.3 ..describe them and explain the MECHANISM how Premature ejaculation EXISTS according this patterns..”

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