Setback in life

    The given topic is about a setback in life and how to overcome it as well as the learning from it This is about a personal essay for university entry. I have already written the document but I need support: 1) current word count is 850 words but it should be reduced to a total word count of 600-max 650 words 2) I need support on the word editing and make it more appealing in terms of language and give it a "wow"