The Energy Efficiency Of Office Building Utilization Of Daylight

Study On Improving The Energy Efficiency Of Office Building Utilization Of Daylight Through Solar Film Sheets
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Please follow the below instruction and ensure to compile the below comments, Also in the attachment there are comments that need to be reviewed. the
most important part that using the APA style to be used APA styled for referencing (author and year)

1. Your objective is to minimize the energy consumption and maximize the comfort of visualization. Therefore, multiobjective optimization might be a useful
   tool for improving your research and achieving your objective.
2. You might make your title more generic and take the office as a case study in your report.
3. Line spacing in the abstract is different. Make it similar to the text in the report.
4. You might consider optimizing the layout design of the office if it will improve your model.
5. On page 6 and 7, use “combined” instead of “combo” if this what you mean.
6. On page 6, points I, II, …. etc. seems objectives rather than research questions. They might be moved to Section 1.5.
7. On page 7, How you will compare the staff performance under the artificial daylighting, natural daylighting and standard electrical lighting. How you will
   measure the staff performance? ANOVA might be a useful tool for this comparison.
8. Section 1.6 is confusing and contains inconsistent items such as literature review, model and measures. Research gap can be explained in eth end of the
   literature review chapter.…

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